GMAT Question of the Day - Sentence Correction

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives,Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

Written by yaggarwal on October 9th, 2008 with 6 comments.
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Kayshav
#1. October 15th, 2007, at 12:59 AM.

This is from the OG11, I remember seeing it there
The ans is C

ramz
#2. October 9th, 2008, at 12:40 PM.

Yeah/…C clearly..the most clear choice.

ricky
#3. October 10th, 2008, at 10:11 AM.

I chose the ans as B..

RAmz– can you please explain your approach

KAPIL
#4. October 10th, 2008, at 10:55 AM.

Ramz
#5. October 10th, 2008, at 2:57 PM.

Ricky,

Why not B?
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

Above option is ambigious…”carefully coordinating them”..what “them” this is unclear
whereas In C it is very clear what “which” signifies.

Devika
#6. October 10th, 2008, at 4:33 PM.

I’ll go with choice C.

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